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Your concept was beautiful as its true. But you need to watch your use of puntuation its lacking. And your 1st and last stanza is the same it gets the ...

As it is on the 25 of the december alot of things happen we all engage in different activity. Personally i slept through it since i have not been getting ...

Thats a lovely poem for a day like this. Stanza 3 line 2 should not start with "Is" its grammatically incorrect. Also in the poem you made use of both ...

I will leave the grammatical errors for some other time. But the concept of the poem was quit confusing, we know you are missing the summer which from the poem ...

Welcome july, i love this poem of yours to much that am not going to critique anything. All i will say is keep writing

I will not call this a poem, there is nothing in it that qualifies it. Alone its just a short note, on the other hand because of its resemblance to ...

Your poem is beautiful i loved it. What peanut said i think the capitalization is not necessary since capitalization is for the old format of poetry Though its still accepted, ...

Your poem was a beautiful one and i enjoyed it. One thing i observed was that there was too much "and" and "but" were they were not necessary try to ...

Most of the critique has been made so i will just say you did a good job keep it up and work on those correction above

Seriously i don't like the poem (am entitiled to my opinion) Its for a reason, you first of all made me think he left you which later prove false, again ...

Ok you did well with your poem its was clear and straight to the point with each stanza ending the way it should. But the other part you are planning ...

Your work is a nice one i enjoy your use of word it was nice but the fluence of it been a poem was not the too much description and ...

I enjoyed your poem the use of words were beautiful. But your last two stanza were confusing make it clear.

Your use of words your fluence was ok i enjoy your poem just that the beginnig lost a lot of puntuation. I love your poem.

It was a good poem all in all. I could have review this poem properly but am browsing with my phone. But there are a few tips i hope they ...